First, revise the journal entry below to reflect detailed examples of improper sentence structure, run-on sentences, and/or lengthy wordiness, poor punctuation, style, and/or tone. Then, reflect on the original journal entry and provide detailed suggestions for areas that could be improved upon. Examples include irrelevant information, lack of sentence structure, tone, fluency, punctuation, poor grammar choice, lack of information, and lengthy wordiness. In conclusion, after reading through the journal entry in full, respond to the following question: Do you feel that you are at risk for Alzheimer's and/or dementia disease? Why or why not?