What is the main problem with this introduction paragraph?
Were your parents wishing for a boy or a girl when they were expecting you?
Many forms of recreation have been unfairly classified as "for boys" or "for girls."
This is a shame because it makes both boys and girls afraid to try activities that
they could really enjoy. Boys and girls should be allowed to participate in any
activities they enjoy and should be supported by friends and family in doing so.
The thesis statement is unclear.
It does not restate the main points of the essay.
It includes opinions instead of just facts.
The hook does not relate to the topic.
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