Write your lawyer paragraph on the physical and emotional impacts from Tom’s perspective
Body Paragraph One – outlines your first point. How has the incident impacted you Emotionally? Or, Physically?
- Explore the subject/ make a point
Example: Daniel’s actions, although callous and brazen, need to be forgiven for myself to emotionally and physically recover
- This is significant because…What is your main reason why?
Example:This is significant because my family and I require Daniel back in our lives so we are able to continue our healing process.
- For example… (refer to evidence from the text) 4-5 sentences. Emotional impacts on Mum and Physical impacts on Mum
This has effected me…
Examples:For example, the accident has caused significant trauma to my health. I am now a quadriplegic and that will never change. Emotionally, I am struggling to come to terms with my new normal. Although it has been challenging, my life has improved day by day. This is a slow process which I will never recover from. It is essential that Daniel is released for the good of my entire family. He will not only help mum to provide me with physical support but allow every Brennan to continue to rebuild emotionally.
- sum it up (adverb start) example:Ultimately, having Daniel back will provide support physically for my mum and allow the entire family to heal emotionally.