Correcting Sentences by Adding Commas

Example:
1. Are you sure you left your book in the room James?

1. room,

Please help with these:

1. Michigan will you read the haiku you wrote?

2. Carla please bring me the newspaper when you finish with it

3. Did you bring the tickets Jorge?

4. After all the work we've done Ann it would be a shame to turn it in late.

5. If you mow the lawn Kelly I'll rake the clippings.

6. Please Mom can you drive me to rehearsal?

7. Mr. Ferguson you have a telephone call.

8. You are dismissed class.

9. How long ha e you worked here David?

10. The problem my friends is simply lack of effort.

thank you!