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Revise the following topic sentence so it's making a debatable claim rather than
summarizing: Wordsworth describes the daffodils in "I Wondered Lonely as a Cloud."
Wordsworth was a writer who lived in England and wrote about flowers.
The daffodils give me just as much delight as they do Wordsworth.
Wordsworth writes, "They stretched in never-ending line / Along the margin of a
bay" (9-10).
Wordsworth compares the daffodils to the sky to create a joyous tone.



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Sure! Here are a few ways to revise the topic sentence to make a debatable claim rather than summarizing: 1. Wordsworth's portrayal of the daffodils in "I Wondered Lonely as a Cloud" evokes a sense of joy that transcends mere appreciation for nature. 2. Wordsworth's poetic description of the daffodils in "I Wondered Lonely as a Cloud" sparks a debate on whether nature holds the key to true happiness. 3. Wordsworth's depiction of the daffodils in "I Wondered Lonely as a Cloud" challenges traditional notions of beauty and admiration in poetry.

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