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proclaiming the time. She felt her bed, solid and secure, beneath her.
"A dream," she whispered
. "It was just a
dream."
Which revision to the underlined sentence uses the most precise language for the style of
writing?
A. Her heart kept pounding in her chest.
B. She could feel her heart bootin



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In the given options, the sentence "She could feel her heart bootin" is not a complete sentence as it lacks the ending, making it grammatically incorrect. The correct revision that uses the most precise language for the style of writing is option A: "Her heart kept pounding in her chest." This revision is more precise and clear in describing the sensation the character is experiencing. It conveys a sense of palpable and intense emotion, which fits well with the style of writing that aims to portray the character's heightened feelings and inner turmoil.

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