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Read the sentence from Abby's essay.
Lampshade dresses were shown by designer Paul
Poiret at an event called the Thousand and Second
Night party, one of the first major Parisian fashion
events.
Which best revises the sentence to be more concise?
O Designer Paul Poiret showed lampshade dresses at
the Thousand and Second Night party, one of the
first major Parisian fashion events.
O Lampshade dresses were shown by Paul Poiret at
an event called the Thousand and Second Night, the
first major fashion event in Paris.
O Paul Poiret's lampshade dresses were shown at a
Parisian event called the Thousand and Second
Night party.
At one of the first major Parisian fashion events, the
Thousand and Second Night party, Paul Poiret
showed the lampshade dresses he designed.