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1.2.14 Quiz: Analyze the Rough Draft of the Declaration of Independence

DRAFT:
"[H]e is at this time transporting large armies of foreign mercenaries to compleat the works of death, desolation & tyranny already begun with circumstances of cruelty & perfidy unworthy the head of a civilized nation."

REVISION:
"He is at this time transporting large Armies of foreign Mercenaries to compleat the works of death, desolation, & tyranny, already begun with circumstances of Cruelty & perfidy scarcely paralleled in the most barbarous ages, and totally unworthy the Head of a civilized nation."

How does the revision's tone differ from the draft's tone?



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Final answer:

The revision of the Declaration of Independence conveys a more intense and condemning tone compared to the draft, emphasizing the severity of the king's actions.


Explanation:

The revision's tone in the Declaration of Independence differs from the draft's tone in its intensified condemnation of the king's actions, using stronger language and emphasizing the atrocities committed. The revision creates a more impactful and emotional tone by highlighting the severity of the situation and the unworthiness of the king.


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