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Which revision is needed to correct the following sentence?

The bright summer sun shone on the stolen pirate ship as it floated in the cool deep water of the harbor.

A. Add a comma after the word "bright."
B. Add a comma after the word "stolen."
C. Add a comma after the word "cool."
D. Add a comma after the word "water."



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Final answer:

Adding a comma after the word 'cool' is the necessary revision.


Explanation:

The correct revision needed to fix the sentence is: Add a comma after the word 'cool.'

Adding a comma after 'cool' helps clarify the sentence structure and prevents ambiguity.

Placing a comma after 'cool' ensures correct punctuation and enhances readability.


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