Read the prompt and thesis statement below.
Prompt: Your school principal has suggested eliminating field trips because they
pose too big of a liability risk for the school. Write a letter in which you describe
two important reasons to keep field trips at your school.
Thesis statement: The state provides affordable entrance fees at historical sites
for students and schools.
Which revision of the thesis statement best addresses the prompt?
3 of 11 QUESTIONS
Field trips offer access to historical sites through special programs
subsidized by the government
Field trips should be required for all grade levels, because many students'
families cannot afford the fees.
Field trips allow all students to observe the world, for which there is no
substitute when a school wants to provide authentic learning
experiences.
Field trips provide students with the opportunity to access historical
buildings and increase their engagement in learning.